Monday, April 27, 2015

None Other Than A Mother Comments

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I wonder that god has ever made a girl like her
her eyes make thee forget the 7 wonders
the anger lies on the tip of her nose,
a small joke and she explodes.
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daieem khan
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Kelly Kurt 27 April 2015

I don't know if I am qualified to assess beyond subjective comments, Daieem. The poem is a tribute to your mother (or all mothers) so all I can add is; add details from your heart and from your life. Don't be afraid to read it many times yourself before deciding that it is done. Keep writing my friend Peace

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