Not Adlestrop Poem by Dannie Abse

Not Adlestrop

Rating: 3.5


Not Adlestrop, no - besides the name
hardly matters. Nor did I languish in June heat.
Simply, I stood, too early, on the empty platform,
and the wrong train came in slowly, surprised, stopped.
Directly facing me, from a window,
a very, very pretty girl leaned out.

When I, all instinct,
stared at her, she, all instinct, inclined her head away
as if she'd divined the much married life in me,
or as if she might spot, up platform,
some unlikely familiar.

For my part, under the clock, I continued
my scrutiny with unmitigated pleasure.
And she knew it, she certainly knew it, and would
not glance at me in the silence of not Adlestrop.

Only when the train heaved noisily, only
when it jolted, when it slid away, only then,
daring and secure, she smiled back at my smile,
and I, daring and secure, waved back at her waving.
And so it was, all the way down the hurrying platform
as the train gathered atrocious speed
towards Oxfordshire or Gloucestshire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Feilx 16 February 2019

I like it a lot. It is very good. Thank you for reading

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very good 28 March 2022

very good

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benjamin uy 28 October 2018

great poem on the hurrying platforms of train stations, excellent discriptions on encountering a beautiful stranger

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momo 28 March 2022

nono

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