Not Really A Poem Poem by millie st.claire

Not Really A Poem



It was cold, your hands we're shaking && I stepped in front of you just to wrap my arms around you as I said 'let's pretend winter isn't here'as you buried your head in my shoulder you said...
'lets pretend the snow isn't the only thing falling fast'

Who would've thought
The girl with the biggest smile on her face everyday
cried herself to sleep [e.v.e.r.y] night
because she knew she wasnt good enough

All she wants is a boy who will call her at 4 am
because he couldn't sleep; hold her hand for no reason
at all, wrap his arms around her and hold her tight;
treat her like she's the most important thing in the
world; and tell her he LOVES her

Grab my hand...lie to me..and tell me you understand everything Im going through...ill look you in your eyes..and believe everything you say.

I've been something I'm not for so long, and I'm scared you won't like what's underneath. But here I am, just flesh, blood, and weakness

She closes her eyes, as
her make up runs...
[[He got the best of her]]

So lets go back again, we can pretend. I'll pretend that i'm happy & you can pretend you always cared

The girl who seemed unbreakable [broke]
The girl who seemed so strong.. *crumbled*
The girl who always laughed it off- cried- && the girl who would never stopped trying..finally gave up..

TruthOrDare
Truth: Tell me how you really feel.
Dare: P.r.o.v.e it
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

that was perfect you are vary talented vary good even tho it was like a book it was vary good you should be a book writer

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Aiden Florence 07 July 2008

This totally qualifies for the lyrics of a new hip-hop song. Nice.

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Joey Habib 07 July 2008

that was phenomenal... you have some raw talent thats hard to find... you wanted the truth there you go... dont ever let someone or something hold you down life is real so be real and real is what you will get...keep your head up and keep it moving...

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