Saturday, November 30, 2013

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She looked at me
when she was listening to the moon
It seemed the moon
was going to speak with her soon
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Alireza Shams
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Roseann Shawiak 09 October 2014

At first it feels like something positive is going to happen, then nothing happened. Loneliness is all that's left. A very good poem, I like it very much. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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