Sunday, October 11, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

The beauty of it all fading
Wasting way to nothing
Flowing into a small pool
Of deep red....
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Jessica Amburgey
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Jameson Peters 27 June 2024

Love the imagery and word play from this author. Would love to see recent work.

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Nikunj Sharma 26 October 2009

Into this I am echoing Silent prayers bewildering As in nothing I become One. Divinely poetic....this has depth in it...keep it up

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Christine Schmidt 11 October 2009

I see darkness in this one.

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