Mina Lotfi

Nothing - Poem by Mina Lotfi

I am concerning about tomorrow
Hardness lose me and my child
My every day question is,
where am i standing?
It is about years
I have gone on wind
There is no chance
This is not me, in myself
Still getting dizzy
Between reading and wanting
Someone calling me, hay you
There is away
Come here as soon...

Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams

Comments about Nothing by Mina Lotfi

  • Jazib Kamalvi (12/7/2017 11:26:00 AM)

    A nice poetic imagination, Mina L. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • (12/7/2017 11:17:00 AM)

    I am sorry to report that this try does not earn the title poem or poetry. It is bad conducted. It lacks poetic diction. and the main aspects of a poem or good poetry. It is not even mere poetry. It is a bad try at anything that could be called a poem. I am being honest for I want to help you. Try to fix it and be careful when doing so..

    Go to work and thanks
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 7, 2017

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