Numb Poem by Autumn Hanna

Numb

Rating: 5.0


I can't feel your anger, your words don't even leave a scratch, I can't feel your icy glare even though it used to be a knife in my back.
I've fell into peaceful darkness, succumbed to this Bliss, I'm still quite alive, but feeling isn't something I miss.
The grief was too heavy and the hatred too much, love was overwhelming and happiness out of touch,
I abandoned your way of living somewhere along the line of light and dark, adjusting to not feeling and prying out my beating heart.
I cast it aside- the last thing holding me back- and filled its hardened void with thoughts cruel and black.
Into the Darkness I stride following its forsaken hum, there are so many new opportunities when you're completely numb.

Thursday, July 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,grief,happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 30 July 2009

good write and imressive way...liked the way you expressed.. in questions and answers.. well done dear writer poet... liked it..10/10

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