Thursday, September 10, 2009

Oasis Of Blue.. Comments

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Placid the place
.....................where we meet secretly.
Our hidden oasis,
............................ thick with love-dust
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Fay Slimm
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Yelena M. 19 September 2009

'Girdle me then ........................... with quiet oasis. Sing me blue moonsongs ..............and make my heart race...' What a beautiful expression, Fay...Thanks for sharing your oasis of blue with us. Yelena M.

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A beautiful and oh! so romantic poem Fay with glorious images and is sounds just like paradise. 10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 10 September 2009

you have secret lover? beautiful fay 10

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Sandra Martyres 10 September 2009

A peaceful and very romantic oasis of blue....lovely write Fay.

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Lynda Robson 10 September 2009

Sounds heavenly, this oasis of blue, well composed Fay, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

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