Friday, November 7, 2008

Obama And Cleopatra Comments

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Saw you when I least expected to:
There in the front row of Obama’s election celebrations,
Your face full of exultation and expectation,
Cheering and waving
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Tony Jolley
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Kevin Wells 12 November 2008

The more one reads this the more personal and poignant it becomes. I have read through it five times, each time more carefully and thoughtfully. Impressions? Profundity. Heartache. Desperate sadness albeit haloed with unrelenting optimism - like the silver around the cloud, on more than one level. The optimism engendered by Obama's appointment and the opportunity for change; The unrelenting optimism of a father shouldering - for the moment - the loathsome weight of unrequited reconcilition. Love will out, my friend. Love will out.

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Fay Slimm 07 November 2008

Parental longing yet again undervalued or underated, but so, so strong, it is a primeval need, and the reader's heart is deeply moved by these end lines, in which a 'Clepopatra moment' is desired..... but hope rings eternal and sleep can renew every dream..... the spirit of it all came through very loud and clear Tony. An unforgettable piece from the pen of a true wordsmith.

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