Observance Poem by Michael Burch

Observance



Here the hills are old, and rolling
carefully in their old age;
on the horizon youthful mountains
bathe themselves in windblown fountains...

By dying leaves and falling raindrops,
I have traced time's starts and stops,
and I have known the years to pass
almost unnoticed, whispering through treetops...

For here the valleys fill with sunlight
to the brim, then empty again,
and it seems that only I notice
how the years flood out, and in...

Friday, July 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem as a teenager, in a McDonald's break room. It was the first poem that made me feel like a "real poet, " so I will always treasure it. The poem was published as "Reckoning" by Arkansas Tech University in Nebo: A Literary Journal, then by Tucumcari Literary Review. After being revised and renamed "Observance, " it was selected as a top 100 poem in the 1999 Writer's Digest rhyming poetry contest, out of over 13,000 overall contest entries. It also won 4th place in another large poetry contest sponsored by Iliad Press. It was subsequently published in Piedmont Literary Review, Romantics Quarterly, Poetry Life & Times, Verses, Setu, Better Than Starbucks, The Chained Muse and the anthology There is Something in the Autumn. Not too shabby for a teenage poet!
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