Monday, August 2, 2010

Ocean Memory Comments

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Cool waters lap the white sands
Oceans salted taste, upon my lips
Birds circling, hesitate to land
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DAUGHTER OF A CRACKED MIND
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Shakuntala Sharma 03 August 2010

beautiful imagery - tender poem - I like it- in fact I like all your poems- my only complaint is about the name you gave yourself- well it's your choice - who am I to object to that?

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