'Ode To Camel's Back Cemetery' Poem by aporva kala

'Ode To Camel's Back Cemetery'

Rating: 4.3


Stars say all fall...
Aft hath twinkle thee
Rains say us pours...
Hind O! cloud crinkle
Wind say thy blow...
Aft pressure prickle
Tears say thee roll...
Rear sadness cry tingle
Sun sees all shine...
Crested dawn tis sprinkle
But life I say dies...
Aft dreams a wrinkle.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sawan Dhyani 10 February 2014

Alright, it was ok. Not bad.

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Avin Kala 10 February 2014

A lovely poem about the coming of age of a writer. Aporva kala in his book LIie..Love..Kumbh.. brings out the need of a boy to create, to follow an uncharted path and to live in his own terms. Quite like the Portrait of an Artist by James Joyce...Lovely poem...

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