Tuesday, October 2, 2018

Ode To Happiness Comments

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A churning river against a rock,
Too immense to move with the flow,
Too insignificant to battle time;
What else remains for it
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Saad Ahmed Shaikh
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Susan Williams 08 November 2018

the journey of life is well depicted in this piece- intriguing! word choice sets the atmosphere well- looking forward to reading more from you

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Saad Ahmed Shaikh 26 June 2023

I completely forgot about this poem here. Thank you so much for your kind words!

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[email protected] 04 October 2018

this is really beautiful, don't give up.

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Saad Ahmed Shaikh 26 June 2023

Thank you! This poem here slipped my mind and I did not realise that someone had commented on it.

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