Saturday, February 21, 2009

Ode To The Forgotten Comments

Rating: 2.8

Ode to the people who were forgotten
They were once loved and cared for

Ode to their lives
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Lauren Harper 23 May 2013

I like the way you write!

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Casey Carpenter 14 February 2013

I was always taught that an ode was to almost suppose to be praising the thing or object being described; also appose to use metaphore to feel the emotion and relation and more of your opinion of the object. Otherwise, verry nice just not an ode maybe use a different repition.

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