Ode To The Office Buildings (Tanka) Poem by ray Schreiber

Ode To The Office Buildings (Tanka)



these granite giants
their polished marble bowels
digest little lives
expelling the empty husks
to blow down the street alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robyn Selters 03 April 2010

Very good. Well said... though chilling in import...it's very true. I like your brevity yet so much was packed into just a few words. Excellent.

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ray Schreiber

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Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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