up from her knees
soft gray eyes finding mine
her moist lips part and say ' I love
A.C would like this cinquain poem... the last line leaves me perplexed as to what is 'these things'...her knees? regards
A moment of intimacy that should have ended with I love you ended with the most impersonal and disturbing words imaginable. (I used a word that must have been censored in my first reply, I hope this is clearer) .
If Adelaide Crapsey liked this cinquain I would be honored beyond words, thank you. To answer your question... a moment of intimacy was reduced to with those two words. Ergo, the ironic title.
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