i spent a week in Odessa. a Motel One room
visited by a depressed cocaine addict.
she told stories of her kids, while we lay
undressed searching for cigarettes on the floor.
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This is pretty darn good. Very atmospheric. First sentence seems unnecessary to me, but I like the poem a lot.
Beautiful. Feels like a sad kiss. This one is my favoirte so far.