Saturday, February 9, 2008

Off To War Comments

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Somewhere in the battle my heart lost the score
But now awaking from my slumber once again off two war
Wounded pride and scarred flesh and mind
The helmet too thin the vest tin foil lined
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Man on the Moon 09 February 2008

Thank you again. My favorite line is 'Somewhere I forgot what I was actually even fighting for' Nice play on words with different connotations, is feeling a battle with self? ?

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