Monday, March 9, 2009

Offense! (Song) Comments

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Count 1. It's good to improve
Count 2. It's good to rest
Count 3. It's good to think
It's good to be able to progress at my own pace.
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Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Improve, rest, and think - yes, good advice indeed. These are the some of your best lyrics. A more advisory, mentor-like message in the song. Very nice. Again, if you check some of the grammar/spelling for presentation, I believe this will stand out amongst your works. Mark

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