Oh The Will To Give Up Poem by kyle potter

Oh The Will To Give Up



Some days I just want to take that dive
Oh the will to give up
I don’t want to survive

Those days the skies grey and my world turns black and blue
She cant cheer me up
If she only knew

The cuts on my wrist so jagged and grim
I can still feel it
My world not dark, but beginning to dim

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cool poem ++10++ up to the top! ! :) I used to cut myself to... :) keep up the good work! ! :)

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Kyle Potter 02 October 2009

thank you im so glad someone likes it :)

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Prerna Batra 01 October 2009

awesum poem....luvd it!

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