Saturday, July 2, 2011

Oh Your Face! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! Your face shines like a star
You make of me the best avatar
Oh! Your air when it comes out
I feel my world now comes about
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Abdullah Demirdoven
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 July 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill and wisdom. Great imagery and a fine style. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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Abdullah Demirdoven

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