Friday, June 20, 2014

Oil Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Old Family Car.
Well loved.
A faithful servant for many years.
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Patrick van der Loos
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Chinedu Dike 12 September 2014

I wonder why you chose the title OIL for this lovely poem. It reminded me of my father's old and well loved car - it was actually his first. The story is simple but cleverly put together. This is the beauty of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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