Old Bass Player (Revised Good Child Version) Poem by Hell Farya

Old Bass Player (Revised Good Child Version)

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...nd so, In this limerick, we mourn a bass player's fate,

At his last call, an old bass player's wake,
Whose love life had a woeful ache.
He played with great skill,
But romance, a skill he'd spill,
Posthumously tho' his bass made hearts quake!
Revised Good Child Version - Old Bass Player

Old Bass Player (Revised Good Child Version)
Thursday, May 16, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick,romance,wake up,woe
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this version, I've added a touch of humor by emphasizing the bass player's lack of success in romance while still highlighting his musical talent. I hope you find this version more amusing!
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