Saturday, October 29, 2005

Old Child Comments

Rating: 3.3

Child. Old child,
No longer wild;
No longer speaking,
No longer beguiled;
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Mihai Cosmescu
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Gabriella Franco 04 August 2006

beautiful write. Child. Old child. Always soft-spoken; No longer breaking, Still being broken; I have become An old child, unspoken. this stanza in particular. 'No longer breaking; still being broken' Love your choice of words. Thank you Gabriela

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Duncan Wyllie 21 January 2006

Dear Mihai Your words have moved me, Oh what if we could all rekindle the wow factor in life. I do, at 37, I'd like to think that there are others out there who do the same. Laugh at ourselves, make snow angels, enjoy making pictures in the clouds.Let's laugh at the little/big things in life. Our perception of what life should be has become over complicated and creates too much paperwork and pain. Just A Thought.Love Duncan

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