Thursday, January 2, 2003

On Easy Street Comments

Rating: 2.7

In times of despair;
Or hopelessness.
I dream of an easy life,
I dream of being on easy street. If I could make a wish,
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Marsha Khoury
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Melvina Germain 26 August 2006

Oh yes, keep writing, I would like to see more poems from you--Melvina

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Melvina Germain 26 August 2006

Sounds OK, but I would be very careful of that rich husband. Richness doesn't necessarily bring happiness. Abuse could be a possibility, however without those two complications, it could be OK. I was married for 39 years and then lost my wonderful husband, he wasn't rich in finances, but we had so much more and I miss him so. We can use more money, but I still like that old fashioned LOVE! I like your poem anyway though and gave it a (10) .

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Marsha Khoury

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Toronto, Ontario, CA
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