On Footpath Poem by Naseem Khan

On Footpath

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On footpath
walking with my shadow
I don't remember you
I don't remember your remembrance
even I forget my memory.

On footpath
while walking
I watch my steps
not to smash the head of a child
not to snatch the lost hope of a mother's begging.

On footpath
the sleeping ones, in real, aweakened
in the dreams of others
washing their cars,
or taking out rotten bread off the dustbin
or having polish the shoes.

On footpath
among many things
one can find
stoned eyes,
melted hearts
and sacked dreams.

Wednesday, May 11, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,dream time,human life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joy Dubé 09 June 2022

I love your poem, it is very visceral and very well written.

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Joy Dubé 09 June 2022

Hi, you just need to add "awakened" maybe? Or just "awake"? Instead of "are awaken". Also having "to" polish, maybe?

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Naseem Khan 22 June 2022

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