On Taking A Break, I Realize Poem by Serious laughs

On Taking A Break, I Realize



I decided to take a break from my hefty life
just to take a deep breath and a glimpse of the world
it struck me then i just realised
my life is completely useless'

what do i get from the work i do every day
except a little cash for my wallet to bear
this world wasn't created for us to indulge
in jobs or school if not with our interest

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richa Dhodi 14 October 2008

i have a different reflect to the things which you are pointing here. The vision of yours is clear and also it depicts that you have a fair heart and you dont want to straddle urself in this materliastic world. I agree, but life itself bring different roles but it is up to us that how we deal with them and balance it in a fair manner.

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