On The Softball Field Poem by Sean Olivia

On The Softball Field

Rating: 5.0


In the diamond the tension rises,
Any mistake could lead to crisis.

The batter goes up to home plate,
Fielders get ready to be slayed.

The pitcher pounces, a lion for prey,
While the batter stares in ultimate dismay.

A fast ball comes, the batter swings,
The pong of the ball on the long bat rings.

Fielders nod, it's a nice strike, they reckon.
But the ball passes them and the batter reaches second.

One team cheers as the other team weeps,
This is really what softball seeks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kenedy nelsen 13 May 2022

I love this poem about softbal! I am only 13 and actually just got my first home run yesterday and this is a amazing poem about that

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softballperson42 11 March 2020

i like it bruv its very cashmoney of you

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Tay Ying Hui 04 December 2011

I am a softballer and I totally agree with your poem. Keep it up! : D

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Even though i had not been on a softball field, i tried to imagine what is supposed to happenon it. I like the words used like 'diamond'. Please continue writing. I will support you on and on and on! XD

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Emancipation Planz 23 July 2008

hey now.. love the chatter... the diamond... the game.. glad I came... I'm bat10 on a home run for this one..

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