Friday, March 29, 2013

Once Upon A Time Comments

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Once upon a time
I actually loved you
Once upon a time
You were my everything
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Ryan Taylor
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Titi Dale 29 March 2013

If a child were to read this poem (as many children often do) , they would find it is an ending they do not want. But if an older person would be to read this, they would think something that differs. I love how you write this because people of differing ages will have different thoughts and opinions. I like your style! Thanks for sharing your poetry, Ryan :)

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