One Day Poem by Alyssa Boccardo

One Day

Rating: 2.5


One day I'll be free
Just you wait and see
Free to myself
All my treasures on that shelf

I just won't care
All the way over there
Lost because I'm wound
Hope I'll never be found

Then someday I'll meet someone
And know that they're the one
He'll be my loon
That one day will be soon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 June 2008

This one is not written very well. The rhymes are just quite there. Perhaps a different approach will achieve your objective. GW62

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