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One Day

Rating: 4.8

I heard there wasn’t more to life
than sitting,
peeling onions,
layer after layer

or sipping on hot chocolate
on a hot day

someone told me life was art
more of a collage, I thought,

pockets of paint thrown against
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Shehzar Doja 18 February 2005

My creative writing teacher suggested i write something along the style of Charles Bukowski so this is my feeble attempt to replicate a genius... that guy is amazing and this poem kinds of makes one think of serious undertone in poetry and straight forward realism..so as this is my first attempt please go easy on me..

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Michael Shepherd 18 February 2005

Fine - respect! Thanks.

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