One For Me Poem by Ivana Suazo

One For Me



Sweet smile, cute face, big eyes 
made me fall for you more than twice 
I miss you now more than ever 
Juicy lips I could kiss forever 
When you look at me ur eyes glisten   
Give me goosebumps when you talk
You whisper hush and I quickly listen
Tell myself your the one I've been missing 
You put me on hold 
I want you even more
You pick me up when I'm down 
I make you smile every time you frown 
You said 'Do you know your the best thing that has ever happened to me?
That's how I know you are the one for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A sweet and well constructed poem...quite amorous indeed...The single-spacing works well here, albeit as a rule, when there is a rhyme scheme involved I like a stanzaic format so as to assure the Reader isafforded the opportunity to read the work without pause, as creating pays ina rhyming poem can result in the Reader not getting the full bounce from therhtmic rhyming cadence that you have created here...Either way, GOOD WORK...I enjoyed! ~FjR~...

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