One Night Comments

If you are a newbie it's a good attempt at poetry. It can onl become better. Take time to look at the words on the screen. I notices a once how each line becomes shorter in length towards the end. Maybe the right words are coming through. at that point. Best wishes and write some more.

This writing has stirred something deep inside this old lady! It is amateurish at times and terribly spelled, but what is that when a writer's heart and soul is displayed for all to see. I cherish this offering.