Tuesday, June 28, 2011

One Sided Goodbyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

We passed through the double doors
of the mortuary, and in that brief flash-
of her face going by- saw all the uncertainty,
the dread, of my own face, and of others going in;
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Patti Masterman
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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