Saturday, March 3, 2012

One Summer 1958 Comments

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You sat with Fay that summer day
on the flat concrete roof
of the World War Two bomb shelter
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Terry Collett
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 03 March 2012

This is really like a film in the 50s and 60s.. Nice narrative poem....i like d story line. Having been kissed By fay, I was glad. And guessed that kissing wasn't at all too bad nice ending....thanks for sharing.

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