One Third Full And Two Thirds Empty Poem by Douglas James Decker

One Third Full And Two Thirds Empty



a can i one hand and bottle in the other
please help me through this night

a coke in one hand and bottle in the other
please help me through this night

she checks to see if theirs coke left
its a third of the way full

a coke in one hand and pills in the other
please let her make it through the night

a coke in one hand and some pills in the other
please help us through the night

she isn't holding on to pills
she's holding onto death
while holding onto a two thirds empty can

theirs a coke in her hand and no pills in the other
theirs no pills in her right hand just a coke in her left

now there is a coke on the grass
two thirds of the way empty

their's also a bottle
a bottle of pills on the ground

right next to the bottle on the ground
their is a coke

a third of the way full
we made it

through that night

Saturday, September 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this in my car right after it happened. my friend was sad and very close to death. if she went i would have followed soon after. im glad i am the way i am i feel like i saved someone. also i saved myself im grateful to still be breathing.
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