Saturday, October 14, 2006

One White Stick Comments

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One white stick
One white stick with an orange rim
Inside one white stick
Is a one-way ticket to the grim reaper
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Natalie Clyne
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Kev Elmer 14 October 2006

I like it :) well done

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Tamsin Burnett 14 October 2006

; -P OO! ! ! i've got it! its a ciggy right! hee hee it took me ages to work that out. i smoke myself so it making a rather pointed point to me. it's an intresting poem, makes one think. nice one.xx

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Natalie Clyne

Natalie Clyne

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