One Winter Night. Poem by Luke Curcio

One Winter Night.



Outside for a moment alone in the night, yet not without light.

The winter's chill makes all quiet.

My breath is shown. My problems remain. My life remains.

The town slumbers. The people dream.

The bleak roar is all around me now. The cold under my skin now.

One more moment, one more breath.

My problems leave. My life remains.

Friday, August 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucas Curcio 26 August 2016

This is my very first poem I've submited online for people to see. I actually wrote this one today as well!

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Sara Canto 26 August 2016

I agree with kelly kurt. Nixely written poem. I like the mood this poem creates.

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Lucas Curcio 26 August 2016

Thanks Sara! Its my first offical poem online!

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2016

A poignant and nicely written piece, Luke. Thanks

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Lucas Curcio 26 August 2016

Thank you so much!

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