Monday, July 24, 2017

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Lost loved one, stabbing pain in heart
The mountain of sorrow hits you hard
And can't be redeemed by joy of paradise.
But Flawless and baffling is time,
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sudip niroula
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time...WELL DONE SUDIP N

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

But Flawless and baffling is time A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY LINE SUDIP

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sudip. Thank you very much,

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Nidhi Agrawal 24 July 2017

Life does go on no matter what. Lovely poem

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