Sunday, May 18, 2008

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A struggle!
From the first
Attempt at the nipple,
Until the final gasp,
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Robert Wylie
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Ben Gieske 18 May 2008

Nicely poemed making me pause to think about the whole situation. One could sacrifice everything and, maybe, gain everything, or, could it mean, gaining nothing? I'm sure there are many answers: not all satisfying, not all accepted.

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Robert Wylie

Robert Wylie

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