Monday, February 25, 2019

Only A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only a kiss were small enough
meant to spice up a life
I'd have more of the precious gift
engage with lips I'd like to touch
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Sean Green
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C F 26 February 2019

Nicely written with plenty of clever play of words, each line flowing smoothly as you recite the verse. Well done.

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