Open Hearts Poem by Lee Imuede

Open Hearts

Rating: 5.0


As life is but a gilded house of clay,
Each day, a host of guests return anew,
With joys or sorrows, darkness or affray,
Each embarking from a path that's askew.

Each guest, a traveler from realms unknown,
With purpose writ in stars, beyond our shores,
Whose presence leads us to our fate foreknown,
And in whose touch, our future lies, and soars.

Come thoughts of shame, or malice strong,
Welcome them all, with humor and grace,
For every soul that sings its siren song,
Leads us to some new-found time and place.

So greet them all with love and open heart,
And let each guest be a new work of art.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem reflects on the unpredictable nature of life, likening it to a house made of fragile clay that is inhabited by various guests. The guests represent the events and emotions that shape our lives, and while some may bring joy, others may bring sorrow. The poem encourages us to welcome all these guests with open arms, as they all play a part in our journey of life. Ultimately, every experience, no matter how difficult, is an opportunity for growth and the creation of something beautiful.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 11 June 2023

3) . We all walking along the same path through life, and it's better to have a welcoming attitude. We can only give 5 stars, but I would give a galaxy of stars for this great sonnet.

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Lee Imuede 15 June 2023

Thanks David. I feel really honoured by your uncommon comment. Thanks once again

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David Wood 11 June 2023

2) . You have captured life in all its unpredictable diversity, and you have focussed on the key message of welcome, not hatred. Welcome is the younger sister of compassion. Compassion is joined with love. You cannot have compassion without love.

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David Wood 11 June 2023

1) . Lee, you have written a superb sonnet as good as any sonnet written by Shakespearean. The imagery and flow are perfect, and is too the essence, the poem's message.

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