Sunday, June 11, 2023

Open Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

As life is but a gilded house of clay,
Each day, a host of guests return anew,
With joys or sorrows, darkness or affray,
Each embarking from a path that's askew.
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Lee Imuede
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David Wood 11 June 2023

3) . We all walking along the same path through life, and it's better to have a welcoming attitude. We can only give 5 stars, but I would give a galaxy of stars for this great sonnet.

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Lee Imuede 15 June 2023

Thanks David. I feel really honoured by your uncommon comment. Thanks once again

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David Wood 11 June 2023

2) . You have captured life in all its unpredictable diversity, and you have focussed on the key message of welcome, not hatred. Welcome is the younger sister of compassion. Compassion is joined with love. You cannot have compassion without love.

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David Wood 11 June 2023

1) . Lee, you have written a superb sonnet as good as any sonnet written by Shakespearean. The imagery and flow are perfect, and is too the essence, the poem's message.

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