DarkX 474


Opportunity - Poem by DarkX 474

Shining stars
up in the sky
makes me feel satisfy
knowing that there is opportunities

Opening up ourselves
to the outside world
one step at a time
pieces by pieces
will solve the puzzle

Take a chance
to a better life
there are billion, or trillions
of stars out there
waiting for you

so reach, reach, and
reach for an opportunity
beyond the stars.


Comments about Opportunity by DarkX 474

  • (5/10/2011 10:05:00 PM)


    I love the way you wrote the poem. Deep and wise with Great imagery. Excellent write. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, January 16, 2012


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