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Great write, I like the imagery your words produce, I feel like I can see, smell, hear and feel everything.

Wow. Extreme usage of imagery. I don't often see this; I commend you. You're a fantastic poetess, so grace us all with your poetic voice.

Funny how you would say your inspiration was boredom but In reality, you felt a sudden desire to put those vivid words in this site. Well written, very expressive, nature is my first view of the poem. A very visual poem, like it. Good job. Don't forget to post often, and keep it up.