Our Day Of Love Poem by Shakira Kallatra

Our Day Of Love



We both
on a cool wind
amble sighly
to the golden sands
holding palms tightly
As azure, nature doze
and covered by my petal frock.
We swayed in the wind from side to side
And by time went
Our mind chilled in mist.
The brightness entered in
Crystal like shining.
And the surroundings disappeared.
Only we both
still holding our palms
The footsteps only to follow us.

Sunday, September 22, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 22 September 2013

Passion glitters Good work There is poetic sensibility. Continue writing

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Gajanan Mishra 22 September 2013

brightness entered.. good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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