Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Our Dream Comments

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Our dreams are getting closer
Closer to the point we can see them gleaming over the horizon
Its glowing as to say this is where you belong
calling me whispering in my ear thoughts of love
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robert snively
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it sounds like you really love her. and it came from the heart and that's good. you shouldn't hide anything when it comes to poetry. poetry should be your naked truth. a really put together poem. i think your girl would be pround. you have my best wishes. keep on writeing. a 9.5 +

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robert snively

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