Our Failure Is In Aspiration Poem by Amy Bengtson

Our Failure Is In Aspiration

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Mistakes happen. A lot. Endlessly.
We scowl at their insistence. Their existence.
Why is perfection far from us
When it is in every model, every character,
Every God-fearing preacher on TV?
Perhaps our failure reeks of stale hope
Or blown trust, or even some of pixie dust.
Were our perceived successes too cheap
Or the mountain of our abilities too steep?
Definitely, without a doubt, probably,
Maybe perhaps there is a slight chance, no.
We failed not because the task was too much
But because our aspirations were just not
Based enough on the last attempt.
Our over-aspiration has caused asphyxiation.
Next time, breathe.

Thursday, July 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aspiration,dream,failure,hope,hopelessness,success,trying
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hamdan Al Maktoum 17 July 2022

Love this 💘💯

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2017

Why is perfection far from us Perhaps our failure reeks of stale hope But because our aspirations were just not Based enough on the last attempt. Over aspiration as a big theme you are projecting it in this poem. Very good idea for all of us read and learn from your good poem. Thank you for reminding us...not to be over aspiring. Thank you dear poetess. tony

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