Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Our Incompleteness Comments

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the turbulence inside
me is the most silent
creation of
my new self, it has learned
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RIC BASTASA
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Alex Roth 17 November 2012

I love how each line is incomplete and yet has it's own meaning, both in relation to themselves and to the subsequent lines as well. It was Poe who said (something to the effect of) that unity is key in poetry. Please read More of the Same, by me, Alex Roth, and tell me what you think.

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