Monday, July 10, 2006

Our Picture Perfect World Comments

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Morning breaks like a fallen glass,
and all i see are dewdrops on grass.
Glistening in the morning sun,
the pearls of heaven are on the run
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Carike Klokow
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Zoe Smith 17 July 2006

Your first stanza is especially dazzling. Beautiful work.

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Carike Klokow

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